Unmotivated Detective Work Chapter 1 part4

It had only been a mere ten minutes since Officer Atami had arrived, but in that s.p.a.ce, the number of customers had gone down considerably. At present, close to nine thirty at Softboiled Land, apart from Chizuru and his two companions, there were only three guests in the shop.

"… Well." Ordering a long-overdue cup of hot coffee, Atami looked at Chizuru. "Then could I hear you out? Your deductions."
"There was one liar among the three suspects, right?"

Ageha stepped in. She pointed at one of the pictures.

"Could it be that Hijikata science teacher?"

Why? Asked Chizuru in a tone where his emotions couldn't be read.

"In regards to the bullying problem, it's all well and good he consulted with the year head, but tomorrow's a week end. Would anyone really go out of their way to phone in such an issue before break? Wouldn't it just be a burden on them all the way?"

… The reason I said impossible wasn't a question of mentality, someone clearly told a lie that contradicts reality."

"Okay, got it," said Atami, shaking off his drowsiness, "Anyways, let's hear out your reasoning."

Chizuru tilted his head a bit, and made a sage-like expression.

"… First, look at this."

From his blazer pocket, Chizuru pulled out the victim's driver's licence.

"Yeah, yeah, thanks for that. Um, let's see. s.h.i.+nozaki Kouichi, registered driver. Address… wait, this is the victim's! Where? When?"

"Hey, what do you think you're doing, Chizuru-kun! That's no good! No good at all!!"

"Eh? What? Bottom? I'm sorry, Beppu-san, I didn't quite catch that."
"You don't need to catch anything, officer Atami. More importantly, let's get back on topic."

Ageha muttered and Atami inquired, and Chizuru silenced the lot of them. The same pattern that had been repeating for a while now developed once more.

"Now officer, it won't be too late to scold me after you've captured the true culprit. So about that driver's license, it was in the victim's wallet. What do you think about that?"

"That's precisely right. But there's also a large group that keep theirs in the glove boy or in the folds of the sun visor. It's an obligation to have your license on you while driving, so they do it to make sure they never forget."

"Let's get the three testimonies in order, shall we. About the reason why the suspects called the victim."

Ignoring Atami's question, Chizuru went on at his own pace.

"Art teacher Nakameguro, 'Invited the victim out for a drink'. Music teacher Mine, 'Asked to use the victim's car for the wind ensemble compet.i.tion tomorrow'. Science teacher Hijikata, 'reported and consulted with the head of year over a bullying problem in the cla.s.s he was charged with'… one of these things is not like the others. Which one could it be."

"Why do you say so, Ageha?"
"No, you've been pus.h.i.+ng the driver's license point for a while now, so I just chose the one related to that."

A bitter smile on his mouth, Chizuru said, "That's quite a meta reason, but correct."
Atami cried out an, 'Eeh?'

"What part of that testimony was strange? The victim was the a.s.sistant advisor of the wind ensemble, so it's only natural she ask he use his car for transport."

"No, there wasn't anything strange about it."

"… His car's in for repairs?"

Atami raised his tone in confusion.

"How could you know something like that?"
"Let's get back to the driver's license. If the victim was the sort who usually kept his license in his car, then if he went out of his way to put it in his wallet, it's thinkable that his car is in for repairs, right?"

"You can't call that sound reasoning," Atami abruptly let out a fed-up tone. "That's just a stretched-out a.s.sumption. You can't deny that the victim may have been someone who usually carried his license around in his wallet. I mean, those sorts of people aren't rare in any sense of the word."
"Yes. That's why the license itself is only support evidence. My real reasons are the two points I'm about to raise."

As if to make a V, Chizuru held up two of his right hand's fingers.

"Proof number one. The victim was caught on camera at the ticket barrier of Yumoto Station."

"If the victim had a car he could drive, why didn't he go to the vacant lot crime scene by car? Why did he have to take the train three stations and then walk?"

"Now listen here, Officer Atami. By his neighbor's testimony, the victim made straight for the station after leaving the house. If he just happened to be out of gas, he'd have to notice that after first stopping by the parking lot."

"Does having low gas mean you can't move your car at all?"
"No, no, that's not what I mean," Atami sounded somewhat impatient, "He would have to be just a few steps from empty."

"In that case," Chizuru leisurely smiled, "the victim would have used his car after all. The reason being, the victim had a promise to keep with Mine tomorrow morning… he had to use his car. In order to shorten whatever business he'd have to go through that morning, going out the previous day to put gas would be the natural response. Of course, if the car was in a must more serious state than an empty tank, there's no way he would instantly agree to Mine’s request."

"Right, and the cincher is the call from the car manufacturer… makers can often be tasked with repairs as well. I'm sure that was a call to say his repairs had been completed. Ah, by the way," Chizuru sensed Atami's intent to refute, "don't tell me he said yes to Mine because he received that call. To review matters, his departure would be in the early morning tomorrow. For someone who would have to go to the plant to pick up his car, I doubt he would 'instantly agree'. And that call came in after Mine’s.
Taking all these facts into account, her call was to summon the victim to that vacant lot, and there's no doubt she told a lie in order to cover it up. Correct me if I'm wrong Ageha, but in the first place, 'Do you really put off a job as important as arranging transport for instruments to the day before the compet.i.tion?' I think there's a problem of mentality there."

Once Chizuru finished his spiel, as if all tuckered out, he sipped his melon soda. "I see," said Ageha, her words intermingled with a sigh.

"Sure enough, you've given me reason to suspect Mine’s request to borrow his car was a lie. Perhaps you're right. But unless you provide an explanation for that dying message, you can't quite call her the culprit."

"Oh, how do you figure?" Ageha tilted her head, "I mean Mine Rikako's initials are

"You don't have to think so hard. That X was decisively that woman's name."

"You listening, Officer Atami? Then look over here."

Chizuru took out a pen, and wrote a, 'X' on the napkin with motions slow enough to irritate Atami.

"The victim stabbed in the back had to write the culprit's name in the small s.p.a.ce of life he had left. As short as possible, as simple as he knew. But Mine Rikako is just a bit too long."

"He could have, but to the social studies teacher s.h.i.+nozaki, a different method had come to mind… Shorter than anything he could have shortened it to, something that would plainly ill.u.s.trate the culprit's name. But even with that, he was unable to add the last two linse before he drew his last breath."

And at the bottom of the 'X', he drew a short perpendicular dash at the top of each line . Both Ageha and Atami let out cries of realization.
Just as they had seen in their geography textbooks, it was the map symbol for a mine.

A little pa.s.sed seven the following morning, as Chizuru waited by the ticket gate of Yumoto Station, Atami arrived. Within the morning rush, he who looked as if a shoddy suit would suit him had the makings of an average salaryman perfectly fit to enter the gates and go off to work.

"I've kept you waiting. Well now Mine Rikako confessed to the crime. Her motive was the victim s.h.i.+nozaki-san using his position as a superior to conduct terrible displays of s.e.xual hara.s.sment. What's more, he even took obscene photos that left no room for misunderstanding, forcing her into a relations.h.i.+p, and with no choice left she killed him. To call him out to the vacant lot, she had made use of those feelings from the victim. Well, it's hard to forgive the deceased, but a murder is a murder. She's currently being interrogated by Ibusuki-san. Ah, I was able to skillfully play off your pilfering of the license."
"I'll be in your care."

Giving a somewhat mistaken thanks, Chizuru's listless remained focused on the envelope in Atami's right hand. The envelope containing a fresh fifty thousand yen withdrawn from his account.
Atami let out a sigh.

"A promise is a promise. To be honest, the fact the victim's car was sent in for repairs was uncovered by the police force before the end of the day. But, well, solving the dying message is your achievement, and it's all thanks to you that the merits went to me."

Chizuru took the envelope, leaking the words, "It's a good thing you're so honest," from his mouth.

"This boy really is impertinent!"

Atami rubbed his knuckle against Chizuru's head. The trouble-hating Chizuru let out an, "Ow. Ow. Ow," in a monotone that made one doubt whether he was in pain or just plain tired.

"Whoah!!"

The one who raised a cry of delight as they left the ticket gate was, to the surprise of none, Ageha. Her face collapsed into a smile as if melting away as she made for the two.

"So early in the morning! Entangled with one another so early in the morning!! You have my deepest thanks!"

"Eh? What's with you two? You're giving me the cold shoulder all of a sudden, Chizuru."
"It's for your own sake."

Shrugging his shoulders in continued incomprehension, he left a few words of, 'See ya,' as he left the two.

"Ah, do you need my contact information, Officer Atami?"

As Atami turned his back, Chizuru called to stop him.

His body stopping in his tracks, he turned around awkwardly.

"What are you talking about? I'm never going to ask for this sort of thing again. So I don't need your contact information. Thank you, and good bye."

As if to run away, he disappeared into the crowd. Seeing off his back, Chizuru’s lips curled into a smile.

"… You won't be able to make it alone."

His mutterings were almost like those of a child who'd found a new toy, thought Ageha.

(TL: Okay, so in the original text, Mine Rikako’s name was Kuwabata Rikako. The dying message was that he was trying to write: , which is the j.a.panese map symbol for a mulberry field, literally p.r.o.nounced Kuwabata. I do apologize if this translation has made the case seem dumber than the original. Really. BTW, the symbol for a mine is )