Juxtaposition Part 5

What was there to do except use the words as keys, perhaps as some psychic revelation that had to be clothed with syntax to become meaningful? If the first four terms brought him from the recent past to the present, the next eight might be taken as signals of the future. At least he would a.s.sume as much for the sake of the poem-insights to himself, now and to come. If the insights proved false, then this was a work of fiction; if true, of prediction. It was a worthy game, and he would take it seriously. Stile bent to it with a will, and the lines fell into their places. No rhyme, no meter, no other ornamentation; just a series of statements like those of the Oracle, clarifying the significance of each key term. He found that there was not a great amount of mystery to it; the statements were mostly common sense, modified by what he already knew, and the whole was an affirmation of man's resignation to fate.

Suddenly time was up. Rue and Stile typed in their poems. Now it was up to the panel of judges. In the interim, those judges had a.s.sembled. Each one sat in a separate booth facing a central holograph. They could view the holo and converse with each other at the same time. The Game Computer was represented by a booth containing a humanoid robot, its outer surface transparent, so that its wires, hydraulics, and electronic components showed. The thing was at first eerie, like an animated cross section of the human body, but soon the eye accepted it for what it was: an animation of a simplified representation of the far more complicated Computer.

"Display one poem," the Computer-figure said. "The serf Rue will commence her reading."

Rue looked at the printed poem in her grid screen and began to read. A holograph of her formed above the central table, where all the judges could see it plainly. It looked as if she were standing there, a woman on a pedestal, and her eyes made contact with those of whatever judge she happened to face.

"My poem is ent.i.tled Cruel Lover," she announced. Then she read, flouncing prettily and smiling or frowning to emphasize the meaning appropriately. As she read each line, it appeared on a simulated screen over her head, until the full poem was printed.

Call me witch or call me b.i.t.c.h Call me square or cube By any name I'm still the flame Burning on the tube.

I'll take no slur, I tell you, sir I will not sit in silence I'll take your glove in lieu of love But will accept no violence.

Now light's reborn by dawn's bright horn You can no longer cheat Accept reproach or be a roach Or make my joy complete.

Desist this drivel and be civil Play violin or flute Be up with mirth or down to earth But keep love absolute.

"The key words are used correctly and in the proper sequence," the Computer said. "Each one terminates its lines, and each is matched with a rhyme of good quality. These are credits. Four lines exist only to complete the necessary rhymes; these are neutral. The metric scansion is correct and consistent-basically iambic tetrameter alternating with iambic trimeter with certain convenient modifications in the extreme feet. This is a common mode and not considered difficult. I rate the technical facility of this effort forty-two of a total of fifty points alloted to this aspect. Proceed to my left with your judgments."

The female serf was to the left. "I don't know much about all those things," she said diffidently. "But it rhymes, and I sort of like it. So I give it a forty-five." There was the illiterate response. Stile thought. That was the vote he had not deigned to court, though it cost him Citizens.h.i.+p.

Next was the male Citizen, resplendent in his ornate robes. "We are not yet discussing content or interpretation?" he inquired. When the Computer agreed, he continued: "I find the format simplistic but effective. I'll give it forty." Stile liked that reaction better.

Then the male serf voted. "I don't relate well to the female tone, but technically it seems all right for what it is. The key words are all in the right place, and they do fit in more neatly than I could do. Forty-three from me."

The female Citizen, in a sequined suit, fire opals gleaming at her ears, voted last. "Some of the lines are forced or confusing, but I suppose I must grade that in content. She's done an excellent job of stringing the random words coherently together. Forty-six."

Stile saw that the average score was forty-three, which was good-probably a good deal better than his own would be. Rue had certainly integrated her terms cleverly. He was going to have a rough time of this one! "We shall now a.n.a.lyze the second poem for technical merit," the Computer said.

Stile stepped up to the grid. He found himself looking past his printed poem into the gla.s.sy orbs of the Computer simulacrum robot. He glanced to the side and saw the male serf. He could see anyone he chose, merely by looking in the correct direction; their circle was laid out flat on his screen.

"My poem is t.i.tled Insights," he said. Then he read: n.o.bility is found in a werewolf b.i.t.c.h Defeat converts to victory by an ivory cube Magic makes ice merge with flame A Game converts serf to sir.

The mischief of the future is shrouded in silence And part of that mischief is love We must heed the summons of Gabriel's horn Destiny the single thing we can not cheat.

All are subject: the dragon and the roach Since we are bound, we must be civil Our fate is determined by G.o.d's flute That tumbles mountains and shakes the earth.

He had made eye contact with each judge in turn as he read, and had seen their responses. Unfortunately, these were not promising; some frowned, some seemed confused. It wasn't going over; they did not understand its form or content.

"This is free verse," the Computer said. "It has no consistent meter and no rhyme. This should not be taken as a defect. The key terms are terminally placed, in correct order, one to a line with no waste lines. There are natural pauses at the end of most lines. As free verse, I rate this technically at thirty-nine."

Stile's heart sank. The others would follow the Computer's lead, and he would average several points below Rue's effort.

He was not disappointed in this expectation. The serf woman wondered whether these lines could even be considered poetry, as they seemed just like sentences to her, and the others were lukewarm. The average score was thirty-eight. Stile was five points behind. Now it was time for the content a.n.a.lysis. Neither poet was permitted to speak at this stage; it was felt that if the poems did not speak for themselves, they were defective.

"This is a straightforward statement of position," the Computer said of Rue's effort. "She evidently feels slighted by her male friend, and is dictating to him the terms of their future a.s.sociation. I perceive no particular meaning beyond this, and therefore do not regard this as other than light verse. Rating thirty-five."

That was a good sign. Stile thought. If the others followed this lead, her average would drop.

"It's a good thing machines aren't in charge of romance," the serf woman remarked. "I find this a good telling-off. The guy is a roach, calling her such names, and I'm all with her. I say fifty."

Stile winced inwardly. He needed to recover five points, and figured they might rate his poem an average 40. The Computer's lead had put him right in line to even it up by dropping Rue's score, but this 50 was a disaster. The male Citizen was more critical, however.

"I certainly don't care to see a woman spelling out her terms like that for a romance, though I suppose, if she can find a man to accept them, it's their business. I don't follow this 'burning on the tube' reference; does it make sense at all?"

"Oh, sure, sir," the male serf said. "In the old days on Earth they had gas burners, gas coming up a tube and the flame on top. So she's likening herself to that sort of flame. It's a sort of pun, really."

The Citizen shrugged. "Clever," he said sourly. "I rate this thirty." Stile saw Rue wince. But he himself, while deploring the man's narrowness, was gratified by the score. It put him back in the running.

The male serf was next. "If she becomes a Citizen, then she can set terms," he said, and the others laughed. They were getting into this now, loosening up. "I guess I'm looking for something deeper than this, some social commentary, not just female demands. Rating thirty-two." And Stile's hopes elevated another notch. Now if only the other woman did not react by s.e.xual alignment- "I believe I note an extremely clever thrust," the lady Citizen said. "Nowhere is the protagonist identified; it is not necessarily serf Rue at all. It could be any woman, most especially one who has been wronged by the man she loves. It could even apply to a humanoid robot female who loves a flesh-man."

Oh, no! Had Rue slanted her verse to pillory Stile? He saw the judges turning to look at him, and at Sheen in the small physical audience permitted. They knew!

"The references to square and cube fall into place," the lady Citizen continued. "A robot is a creature of geometrical parts, supposedly, animated by electric power from a tiny furnace fed by Protonite. She is certainly burning, internally! She must accept a man's attentions-I under stand that is what that type is primarily designed for-but can not have his love, since he knows she is a machine. Yet she can be programmed for emotion; she loves him, knowing that love is not returned. Perhaps the man she serves is a musician, playing the violin or flute-" Sheen got up from her seat in the audience and walked toward the exit. Stile felt acute pity for her. She was not supposed to be the target!

"One moment," the male Citizen said. "That's her, isn't it? I want to question her."

"That would be involving her in the panel's deliberation," the female Citizen said. "I doubt that's legitimate."

"The judges may seek any source of information they wish," the Computer said. "Except the author of the piece in question."

"Female robot-how do you feel about this poem?" the male Citizen called.

Sheen stopped and faced him. "Sir, I prefer not to answer, if I am to be considered an interested party."

"Answer!" he directed, with supreme indifference to her feelings.

"You may answer," the Computer said. "You have not volunteered your influence; you have been summoned by this panel as a material witness. We are trying to deter mine whether there is substance to the hypothesis that the poem in question represents your viewpoint."

Sheen's mouth finned. Her human mannerisms had be come so facile that in no physical way was her machine nature evident. She was a beautiful woman, naked of body and perhaps of mind. "Then you shall have my viewpoint, sir. If the poem concerns me, it is not intended as a compliment. It is intended as an attack on the man I love, using me as an involuntary weapon. I am a machine-but I think that even were I alive, I would not care so cynically to hurt a living person in this fas.h.i.+on. This poem is crueler than anything the man I love might do. I am sure his own poem is not of this nature."

The Citizen nodded. "That's some machine," he murmured.

The female Citizen considered, pursing her lips. Her opals flashed. "I am left with a choice. Either this poem is not directed at, shall we say, real people, in which case it is not remarkable-or it is so directed, in which case its brilliance is nullified by its cruelty. In either case, I cannot respect it. I rate it twenty-five." That was disaster for Rue. It made her average score 34. The other panelists could reconsider their votes if they wished, but seemed content to let them stand. Rue's poem had a c.u.mulative score of 77'. Stile had a fair chance to beat that, thanks to Sheen. All he needed was forty points.

Now the judges considered Stile's effort for content. "This poem is more serious and obscure than the other," the Computer said. "Some may not be aware that there exists an alternate frame of reality of this planet within which other laws of physics govern. The author is able to enter that frame, where he is a person of power and has an elegant wife. Several of the first six lines evidently refer to that frame. There was a female wolf who sacrificed her life for her duty, and a magical encounter between a creature of ice and another of fire. The future in that frame can occasionally be foreseen by magical means, and it contains extraordinary mischief, part of which is the conflict of love loyalties. Two lines refer to the Tourney now being concluded, which will lead to Citizens.h.i.+p for one of these serfs. Thus the first portion of the poem is relevant to the larger situation here and must be accorded credit. The second portion appears to be an advisory essay. The Angel Gabriel is destined mythologically to blow his trumpet on Judgment Day for living persons-and that call is the one no one can evade or cheat. This poem extends this concept to creatures both fanciful and repulsive. It concludes that these people and creatures must accept the inevitable with civility, and reminds us that, according to the legend of the other frame, the powerful flute-perhaps an alternate designation of Gabriel's horn-has already announced it self by shaking the earth, in the form of the tremors recently experienced here. Allowing for a considerable figurative element, I find this poem serious and valid. The tremors were actually caused by the collapse of over worked Protonite mines in the southern range, but this can be taken as a warning: the mineral on which this planet's power is literally based is not inexhaustible, and we shall suffer an accounting when that mineral is at last depleted. Already we have suffered a not-inconsequential damage to a number of our facilities. I therefore take this poem as a well-conceived and serious warning, and on that basis I rate it forty-eight."

Stile was amazed and gratified. He had had no hint the Game Computer knew so much about him or the frame of Phaze, or that it could interpret oblique references with such dispatch. Now he realized that everything he had told Sheen, she had relayed to her machine friends. They in turn could have informed the Game Computer, who per haps was one of their number. Certainly it possessed considerable self-will, backed by the phenomenal resources of the Computer memory banks and the experience of a.n.a.lyzing many thousands of Games. So this should not have surprised him at all.

It was the serf woman's turn to vote. "Is there any cutting at the opponent?" she asked. The other heads indicated that no one perceived any. "I'm not sure about all the business of the other frame; this is the first I've heard of it. But I can believe the Protonite won't last forever, and somehow this serf-Citizen setup must be called to account. So okay, I'll go with the warning. I rate it forty." This was better than Stile had hoped from her. She had given the other poem 50, and he had feared she was a man hater.

"Good job," the male Citizen said. "Forty-five."

"Just what kind of a person is he in that frame you talk about?" the serf man asked, "He is what is called an Adept," the Computer answered. "That means he is a powerful magician."

"Funny to hear a computer say that," the man said. "But I sort of go for that fantasy bit, even if it is all a story. Forty-two."

Stile's hope was sailing. These were amazingly favorable responses. He was averaging 44. It would take a rating of 25 by the last panelist to bring him down to par with Rue. The lady Citizen seemed too perceptive for that-but she had surprised him before. He felt his hands getting sweaty as he waited for her answer.

"This mischief of love," she said. "Is this person concerned about the feelings of the lady robot who loves him?"

"He may not answer," the Computer reminded her. "We must divine that answer from his poem."

"I wonder whether in fact it is his own personal reckoning he is most concerned with," she said. "He says they must be civil, because what will be, will be. I am not sure I can accept that answer."

Stile quailed. This woman had downgraded Rue's verse for cruelty; was she about to do the same for his?

"Since he has a wife in the other frame, he really does not need a woman of any kind in this frame," she continued. "It is unfair to keep her in doubt."

"We may approve or disapprove the poet's personal life," the male Citizen said. "But we are here to judge only the merit of the poem. For what it's worth, I see several indications that he recognizes the possibility of fundamental change. A b.i.t.c.h turns n.o.ble, defeat becomes victory, ice merges with flame, serf becomes Citizen, the fate of dragons and roaches is linked. Perhaps he is preparing his philosophy for the recognition that a living creature may merge with a machine. If this is the way fate decrees, he will accept it."

She nodded. "Yes, the implication is there. The author of this poem, I think, is unlikely to be deliberately cruel. He is in a difficult situation, he is bound, he is civil. It is an example more of us might follow. I rate this work forty four."

Stile's knees almost gave way. She had not torpedoed him; his total score would be 82, comfortably ahead of Rue's total.

"Do any wish to change their votes on either aspect of either poem?" the Computer inquired. "Your votes are not binding until confirmed."

The panelists exchanged glances. Stile got tense again. It could still come apart!

"Yes, I do," the serf woman said. Stile saw Rue tense; this was the one who had given her 50 on content. If she revised her grade on Stile's poem downward- "I believe I overreacted on that fifty score," she said.

"Let's call it forty-five for Cruel Lover." Again Stile's knees turned to goo. She had come down on his side!

"Final score eighty-two to seventy-seven in favor of Stile's poem," the Computer said after a pause. "He is the winner of this Tourney."

Now there was applause from the hidden public address system. So quickly, so simply, he had won! But he saw Rue, standing isolated, eyes downcast. On impulse he went to her. "It was a good game," he said. "You could easily have won it."

"I still have life tenure," she said, half choked with disappointment. Then, as an afterthought, she added: "Sir."

Stile felt awkward. "If you ever need a favor-"

"I did not direct my poem at you. Not consciously. I was thinking of someone who threw me over. Sir." But now the crowd was closing in, and Stile's attention was necessarily diverted.

"By the authority vested in me by the Council of Citizens of Planet Proton," the Game Computer said, its voice emerging from every speaker under its control throughout the Game Annex, "I now declare that the serf Stile, having won the Tourney, is acquitted of serf status and endowed with Citizens.h.i.+p and all appurtenances and privileges pertaining thereto, from this instant forward."

The applause swelled ma.s.sively. The panelists joined in, serfs and Citizens alike.

A robot hastened forward with an ornate robe. "Sir, I belong to your transition estate. It is your privilege to wear any apparel or none. Yet to avoid confusion-"

Stile had thought he was braced for this, but the repeated appellation "sir" startled him. For a lifetime he had called others sir; now he had comprehensive conditioning to unlearn. "Thank you," he said, leaching for the robe. The robot skittered to the side.

"Allow me, sir," it said, and Stile realized it wanted to put the robe on him. It did not behoove a Citizen to serve himself, though he could if he wanted to. Stile suffered himself to be dressed, holding a mental picture of a horse being saddled.

"Thank, you," he repeated awkwardly.

The machine moved dose, getting the robe on and adjusted. "A Citizen need not thank a machine-or anyone," it murmured discreetly in Stile's ear.

"Oh. Yes. Thank-uh, yes."

"Quite all right, sir," the machine said smoothly.

Now a lady Citizen approached. It was Stile's employer. Former employer, he reminded himself. "I am gratified, Stile," she said. "You have made me a winner too."

"Thank you, sir." Then Stile bit his tongue.

She smiled. "Thank you, sir." And she leaned forward to kiss him on the right eyebrow. "I profited a fantastic amount on your success. But more than that is the satisfaction of sponsoring a Tourney winner. You will find me appreciative." She walked away.

Now the Citizen known as the Rifleman approached. "I know exactly how you feel," he said. That was no exaggeration; the Rifleman had won his own Tourney fifteen years before. Stile had encountered him in the first Round of this Tourney and barely pulled out the victory. The Rifleman had been an excellent loser.

"Accept some private advice. Citizen: get away from the public for several days and drill yourself in the new reality. That will cure you of embarra.s.sing slips. And get yourself someone to explain the ropes in nontechnical terms-the extent of your vested estate, the figures, the prerogatives. There's a h.e.l.l of a lot to learn fast, if you don't want to be victimized by predatory Citizens."

"But aren't all Citizens-that is, don't they respect the estates of other Citizens?"

"Your minimum share of the Protonite harvest can not be impinged upon-but only your luck and competence and determination can establish your place in the Citizen heirarchy. This is a new game. Stile-oh, yes. Citizens have names; we are merely anonymous to the serfs. You may wish to select a new name for yourself-"

"No need."

"It is a game more intricate and far-reaching than any within the Tourney. Make a point to master its nuances, Stile-soon." And the Rifleman gave him a meaningful glance.

The audience was dissipating as the novelty of the new Citizen wore off. Stile signaled Sheen. "Can your friends provide me with a mentor conversant with the nuances of Citizen behavior?"

"They can, sir," she said. "Or they could program me-"

"Excellent! Get yourself programmed. They'll know what I need. And do it soon."

Sheen left. Stile found it incongruous that she should remain naked while he was now clothed. Yet of course she remained a serf-an imitation serf-now in his employ; she would remain naked the rest of her life. Her life? Stile smiled, a trifle grimly. He was forgetting that she had no life. Yet she was his best friend in this frame.

Stile turned to the robot who had brought his robe.

"Take me to my estate," he ordered it.

The machine hesitated. "Sir, you have none."

"None? But I thought all Citizens-"

"Each Citizen has a standard share of the Protonite mines. All else follows."

"I see." It seemed there was much that was not handed to a Citizen on a platter. He needed that manual of Citizens.h.i.+p! Where was Sheen? Her programming should have been quick.

Then she appeared. "I have it, sir," she said.